So, I thought that this was a site that I could write chapters from my book and get alot of feedback. I was severely mistaken. I don't know anyone and everything I have read has either been about Christ or the stupidity of the human race. I've read a few things that caught my attention, but really no one seems interested in contact with others. This is basically a site where you can write whatever you want, and maybe someone will come across it. I wrote my first two entries a few months ago and haven't gotten ONE comment. That totally sucks! And I know for a fact that my story isn't THAT bad! Even if it sucks...someone could write that.

I've edited alot of this but it's on my other computer, and I don't feel like transferring it over. This is the oldest draft.
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As Deep As The Ocean
Book 1 of the Deepest Trilogy

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Dedicated To Caleb and Allie

To Caleb and Allie.
Thank you guys with all my heart.
You became my inspiration.

Prologue

I recently finished my first novel. It's the first of a Trilogy, and it's called "As Deep as the Ocean". All the friends that I have let read it have loved it, but we all know that friends don't like to hurt each others feelings. Don't get me wrong, I want praise, but I want to make sure that it's honest praise. I want to know if my writings really good. If you read it and you have critism, then please make it constructive. I ask you to not write "it sucks" and leave it at that. I'd like to have something that may help me make my work better. I feel very vulnerable right now, but if I ever want my work to be seriously looked at or maybe one day published I think I have to get some real feedback first. I'm going to put chapters from "As Deep as the Ocean" on here.