I recently finished my first novel. It's the first of a Trilogy, and it's called "As Deep as the Ocean". All the friends that I have let read it have loved it, but we all know that friends don't like to hurt each others feelings. Don't get me wrong, I want praise, but I want to make sure that it's honest praise. I want to know if my writings really good. If you read it and you have critism, then please make it constructive. I ask you to not write "it sucks" and leave it at that. I'd like to have something that may help me make my work better. I feel very vulnerable right now, but if I ever want my work to be seriously looked at or maybe one day published I think I have to get some real feedback first. I'm going to put chapters from "As Deep as the Ocean" on here. When I finish putting them on here then I'll go to the second one, "As Deep as the Sky" and then the third is "As Deep as My Heart". I'm also writing a book called "Chreshlev" so don't be surprised if you find chapters of it on here. Thanks!

TTFN
Kayla